Nironavro
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What do you think of the changes to B? What could be improved? Cleaned up some of the letters, modified the black and white spaces. Played with sizing on the words and the bucket character.
devronkally8
B is better, seems brighter, catches the eye more.
kheltan
I like the heavy outline in B
djhash
I prefer the bolder fluff in A!
Nironavro
It stands out more, doesn't it...?
skinart
I like "A" more. "Fluff" is a bit easier to read. Narrowing of the gap between text and outline in "B" makes the colours look desaturated.
Nironavro
Yeah I thought they looked desaturated too. ?
MagmaCarta
I think both work, depending on what background you're going to be using. Like a black Tshirt? Use B. White poster board? Use A.
Nironavro
Interesting. ? Thanks! ?
MoonMoon89
What would you do if it is on a white background?
Nironavro
Unsure. Our MO is to usually use black. In fact, our labels are black with white text and logo so there's no color on our labels.
capnadorable
Make the mouth smaller, eyes further apart
Nironavro
I'll give it a try
capnadorable
Actually just the mouth smaller, leave the eyes, make sure the smaller mouth top lip still lines up with where it’s at
Nironavro
Sure thing! Thanks!